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Prince Of Ayodhya (Book One of The Ramayana)
by Ashok K. Banker
pub: Orbit/Times Warner. 532 page paperback. Price:
£ 6.99 (UK). ISBN: 0-84149-186-1
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Ayodhya,
a huge fortified Capital city of the Arya nations is under threat.
It has never been invaded or defeated but now a new rising threat
puts the city in perilous danger.
For many decades, the Maharaja Dasaratha has ruled
over a peaceful land but war now seems imminent. Having fought the
Asura (demon) invasion over two decades ago, he led his troops and
overthrew the Asura pushing them out of the mortal realm.
His
oldest son, Rama, has terrible premonitions of Ayodhya being raped
and destroyed by Asura in his dreams. The great Guru Vishwamitra
leaves the forest after 200 years of meditation and journeys to
Ayodhya to see the Maharaja to warn of the imminent invasion.
On arriving at the city, he disguises himself as a
peasant as he is aware that a demon Asura assassin is also entering
the city pretending to be him. After much debate, Rama leaves with
his brother and Vishwamitra on a quest to stop the Asura invasion.
Much of this book and story seems familiar and in
some ways it should. It's based on Ramayana, which in itself is
a very popular story for many Hindus.
The Ramayana is said to have been scribed by the poet
Valmiki, who according to tradition lived around 2200BC in the area
around Ayodhya in today's Uttar Pradesh. According to legend, he
had been converted from a thief to the worship of Rama.
For penance, he sat motionless in one place until
termites (in Sanskrit valmikas) built a hill around him until only
his eyes were visible. The Ramayana is shorter than Mahabharata
(which is probably more well known of in the west) and this first
book covers the start of Rama's story.
This story far from being unoriginal could be argued
to be the basis for not only Indian culture, religion and art but
similar themes crop up in later myths and stories such as those
of Greek, Roman and Norse origin to name a few.
OK, so there is not much new here. A would-be prince
usurps his royal duties to go on a quest with a Guru come magician
and fight off evil hordes. You only have to look at the modern retelling
of the Beowulf, numerous written versions and of course, Michael
Crichton's 'Eaters of the Dead'/'13th Warrior' to see that there
is no harm in retelling old stories, legends and myths.
Also it's good way to introduce these stories to a
wider audience but what is the book really like I hear you ask.
Well overall, it's not as bad as some would have you believe although
it's not without its problems. I think the biggest flaw is pacing.
Sometimes you just feel that you are overburdened with descriptions
and detail.
You just feel like saying 'stop mucking around and
get on with it'. The author tells just that bit too much about a
scene or a character. It's a bit like wading through treacle - tastes
good but it doesn't half slow you down. I don't know how close this
book is to the original text and whether this descriptive flaw is
that of the original or the author's expansion of the story.
There are though some wonderful scenes - an almost
Matrix-like 'arrow time' scene where Rama rescues what he thinks
is an injured doe.
The telling of the story of Lord Shiva is also highly
entertaining. Ashok K. Banker uses quite a few words and phrases
from Sanskrit and other ethnic Indian languages but he provides
a most useful glossary of these for reference.
Altogether, these add to the mood and pathos of the
book. Overall, I would recommend this book. It's an enjoyable easy
read and if it helps bring an old story to a wider readership then
that's no bad thing.
If you like straight forward simple, fantasy then
gives it ago.
Phil Jones
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